Short Story - 1 - The Eyes are not Here
About the Author & the Story
Ruskin Bond (born 19 May 1934) is an Indian
author of British decent. In 1992, he received the Sahitya Akademi Award for
his short story collection, Our Trees
still Grow in Dehra, given by the Sahitya Akademi, Indian National Academi
of Literature. He was awarded the Padma Shri in 1999 for contributions to
children’s literature. He now lives with his adopted family in Landour, near
Mussoorie.
The Eyes are not Here (also known as The Girl
on the Train & The Eyes Have It) is a short story by Ruskin Bond, that was
originally published in Contemporary
Indian English Stories. The narrator of this story, a blind man whose eyes
were sensitive to light and darkness, was going to Dehradun by train when he
met a girl and had a chit chat with her. It was only after she left and another
passenger came into the compartment that the narrator realizes the girl was
blind.
Story
I had the compartment to myself
up to Rohana, and then a girl got in. The couple who saw her off were probably
her parents; they seemed very anxious about her comfort, and the women gave the
girl detailed instructions as to where to keep her things, when not to lean out
of the windows, and how to avoid speaking to strangers. They said their
good-byes; the train pulled out of the station.
As I was totally
blind at the time, my eyes sensitive only to light and darkness, I was unable
to tell what the girl looked like; but I knew she wore slippers from the way
they slapped against her heels. It would take me some time to discover
something about her looks and perhaps I never would. But I liked the sound of
her voice, and even the sound of her slippers.
‘Are you going all the way to
Dehra?’ I asked. I must have been sitting in a dark corner because my voice
started her. She gave a little exclamation and said,’ I didn’t know anyone else
was here.’
Well, it often happens that people
with good eyesight fail to see what is right in front of them. They have too
much to take in, I suppose. Whereas people who cannot see (or see very little)
have to take in only the essentials, whatever registers most tellingly on their
remaining senses
‘I didn’t if I would be able to
prevent her from discovering that I was blind, I thought. ‘Provided I keep to
my seat, It shouldn’t be too difficult.’
The girl said, ‘I’m getting down at
Saharanpur. My aunt is meeting me threre.’
Then
I Had better no be too familiar,’ I said. ‘Aunts are usually formidable
creatures.’
‘When
are you going?’ she asked.
‘To
dehra, and then to Mussoorie.’
‘Oh,
how lucky you are, I wish I were going to Mussoorie. I love the hills.
Especially in October.’
‘Yes
this is the best time, ‘I said calling on my memories. The hills are covered
with wild dahlias, the sun is delicious, and at night you can sit in front of a
log-fire and drink a little brandy. Most of the tourists have gone, and the
roads are quite and almost deserted. Yes October is the best time.’
She was silent, and I wondered if my
words had touched her, or whether she thought me a romantic fool. Then I made a
mistake.
‘What
is it like?’ I asked.
She seemed to find nothing strange in the
question. Had she noticed already that I could not see? But her next question
removed my doubts.
‘Why don’t you look out the
window?’ she asked.
I moved easily along the berth
and felt for the window-ledge. The window was open, and I faced it, making
pretence, of studying the landscape. I heard the panting of the engine, the
rumble of the wheels, and in my mind’s eye, I could see the telegraph-posts
flashing by.
‘Have you noticed,’ I ventured,
that the trees seem to be moving while we seem to be standing still?
‘That always happens,’ she said.
‘Do you see any animals?
Hardly any animals left in the
forests near Dehra.’
I turned from the window and
faced the girl, and for a while we sat in silence.
‘you have an interesting face,’ I
remarked. I was becoming quit daring, but it was a safe remark. Few girls can
resist flattery.
She laughed pleasantly, a clear
ringing laugh.
‘It’s nice to be told I have an
Interesting face. I am tired of people telling me I have a pretty face.’
‘Oh, so you do have a pretty
face.’ Thought I, and aloud I said:
‘You are very gallant young man,’
she said. ‘But why are you so serious?
I thought then, that I would try
to laugh for her,’ but the thought of laughter only made me feel troubled and
lonely.
We’ll soon be at your station,’ I
said.
‘Thank goodness it’s a short
journey. I can bear to sit in a train for more than two or three hours.’
Yet I was prepared to sit there
for almost any length of time, Just
to listen to her talking. Her voice had the sparkle of a mountain stream. As
soon as she left the train, she would forget our brief encounter; but it would
stay with me for the rest of the journey and for some time after.
The engine’s whistle shrieked, the
carriage wheels changed their sound and rhythm.
The girl got up and began to collect
her things. I wondered if she wore her hair in a burn, or if it was plaited, or
if it hung loose over her shoulders, or if it was cut very short.
The train drew slowly into the
station. Outside, there was the shouting of porters and vendors and a
high-pitched female voice near the carriage door which must have belonged to
the girl’s aunt.
‘Good-bye,’ said the girl.
She was standing very close to
me, so close that the perfume from her hair was tantalizing. I wanted to raise
my hand and touch her hair,’ but she moved away, and only the perfume still
lingered where she had stood.
‘You may break, you may shatter
the vase if you will, but the scent of the roses will linger there still…..
There was some confusion in the
doorway. A man, getting into the compartment, stammered an apology. Then the
door banged shut, and the world was shut out again. I returned to my berth. The
guard blew his whistle and we off. Once again, I had a game to play with a new
fellow- traveler.
The train gathered speed, the
wheels took up their song, the carriage groaned and shook. I found the window
and sat in front of it, staring into the daylight that was darkness form me. So
many things were happening outside the window. It could be a fascinating game,
guessing what went on out there.
The man who had entered the
compartment broke into my reverie. ‘You must be disappointed,’ he said,’ I’m
not as attractive a travelling companion as the one who just left.’
‘She was an interesting girl,’ I
said.’ Can you tell me –did she keep her hair long or short?’
‘I don’t remember,’ he said, sounding
puzzled.’ it was her eyes I noticed, not her hair. She had beautiful eyes but
they were of no use to her, she was completely blind. Didn’t you notice?’
Summary
Up to Rohana, the narrator was alone
in the compartment. A girl boarded towards the compartment. Her parents bid her
good bye at the station and were anxious about her well being and advised her
lot regarding where to keep her belongings, not to lean out of the windows and
to avoid talking to strangers.
Once the train left the station, the
narrator started a conversation asking if she too was going to Dehra. The voice
startled her as she thought her to be alone in the compartment. The girl told
him that she was going to Saharanpur where her aunt would come to take her
home. She also desired the narrator as the hills of Mussoorie, where he was
headed to, presented a lovely sight in October.
After some more chit-chats, the
narrator told her; quite daringly (as he was blind and couldn’t have known her
face for sure) that she had interesting face. She was happy at this and replied
that it was indeed a welcome deviation from the often repeated phrase: “You have a pretty face”
Soon it was time for the girl to offer
goodbye as the train arrived at her destination. After her departure, a man
entered the compartment and apologized, as a matter of fact, for not being as
attractive a travelling companion as his predecessor. When the narrator asked
him if the girl had her long or short, he replied with interest that he had
noticed only her eyes, which were beautiful but no use, as she was completely
blind.
Summary
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Up to
Rohana, the narrator was alone in the compartment. A girl boarded towards the
compartment. Her parents bid her goodbye at the station and were anxious about
her well-being and advised her lot regarding where to keep her belongings, not
to lean out of the windows and to avoid talking to strangers.
Once the
train left the station, the narrator started a conversation asking if she too
was going to Dehra. The voice startled her as she thought her to be alone in
the compartment. The girl told him that she was going to Saharanpur where her
aunt would come to take her home. She also desired the narrator as the hills of
Mussoorie, where he was headed to, presented a lovely sight in October.
After some
more chit-chats, the narrator told her; quite daringly (as he was blind and
couldn't have known her face for sure) that she had an interesting face. She
was happy at this and replied that it was indeed a welcome deviation from the
often repeated phrase: "You have a pretty face".
Soon it was time for the girl to bid goodbye as the
train arrived at her destination. After her departure, a man entered the
compartment and apologized, as a matter of fact, for not being as attractive a
travelling companion as his predecessor. When the narrator asked him if the
girl had her hair long or short, he replied with interest that he had noticed
only her eyes, which were beautiful but of no use, as she was completely blind.
· What is the theme of the story "The Eyes Are Not Here"
by Ruskin Bond?
Ruskin
Bond’s short story “The Eyes Are Not Here” is very brief but is also
intriguingly complex. Although most worthwhile stories cannot be easily
paraphrased or reduced to a single theme, this story definitely seems to deal
with issues of human perception. In this tale, three people, at least, prove to
be imperceptive in various ways: the unnamed man on the train, the unnamed
woman on the train, the story’s reader, and, perhaps, also the new male
passenger. Bond’s story is the kind of tale that makes readers want to read it
immediately a second time as soon as they have finished reading it once. Only
on re-reading, in fact, does the story reveal its full richness and complexity
as a meditation on human perceptions and perceptiveness and how both are
influenced by the assumptions we make.
Plot
Construction
A
man (presumably a young man) is sitting in a compartment in a train when a
woman (apparently a young woman) also enters the compartment. The woman doesn’t
notice that the man is blind, and he does not tell her. Instead, he asks her a
series of questions that allow him to infer certain facts about her. She also
converses pleasantly with him. After she gets off the train at her stop,
another male enters the compartment and mentions in passing that the young
woman who just left the compartment was blind. Thus, the young man on the
train failed to perceive that the young woman was blind, as did the reader of
the story. The young woman apparently also failed to perceive that the young
man was blind, and this may also be true of the male who enters the compartment
near the end of the story. In a very brief tale, then, Bond has managed
to create a remarkably complex story about the limits of human perception and
perceptiveness and about how people tend to make assumptions and then take
those assumptions for granted in ways that influence what they perceive or fail
to perceive.
Once
the story is re-read, the reader notices various intriguing details and clues,
including the following:
- The girl’s parents are very concerned about her when she gets on the train, but both we and the young man assume that there is nothing special about their concern. It doesn’t occur to us that the girl may be blind.
- The young woman is startled when the young man speaks, but both we and he assume that she is startled simply because he is sitting in the dark. Once again, it doesn’t occur to us that the girl may be blind.
- The young male, commenting on the fact that the young woman was startled, thinks to himself,
Well,
it often happens that people with good eyesight fail to see what is right in
front of them.
- Later, of course, we realize that this statement is a sly comment, by the author, on the imperceptiveness of readers. After all, it doesn’t occur to us that the girl may be startled because she is blind. We make an assumption, and then we perceive all the rest of the events in light of that assumption. So, too, does the narrator, and so the narrator’s joke at the expense of sighted people is also a joke by the author at the expense of the narrator. Rather than being offended by the author’s sly trick, we ultimately appreciate all the ways in which he tricks both us the narrator, because we (both readers and narrator) ultimately learn a very valuable lesson about the influence of initial assumptions on the ways we perceive (or fail to perceive) the world and other persons.
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